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Post by Merry Smindmas on Jun 7, 2005 4:03:40 GMT -5
Yeah, it does look better now. I think those bangs give her a bit of a fat face though ;D
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Post by midopa on Jun 7, 2005 4:06:07 GMT -5
The thing is that the hair might be too detailed for those zig-zag highlights. From what I can recall, anime hair isn't as detailed as this, at least in actual animations. Tou usually get the outline of the form and just a few lines to maybe add more definition to the ends hair strands. The zig-zag highlights then show the rest of the hair's form.
If you don't mind my asking, what's this for? It looks good and I reckon it kinda looks like that girl with the flapping wings/ears/hair in your avatar?
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Post by Zhan D'vega on Jun 7, 2005 5:11:01 GMT -5
The girl in my avatar is Chiyo from Azumanga Daioh, the girl I'm drawing is Noboru, an original character from my webcomic, aiyaiyai.keenspace.com/ which I'm restarting. The picture I'm drawing right now is part of the title page, and will be watercoloured.
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Post by Ultra Magnus on Jun 7, 2005 5:38:09 GMT -5
the only thing I feel is off about the drawing that the head seems way too round, but it's probably only me, so it's nothing to worry about Zhan ole' buddy, ole' pal
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Post by Merry Smindmas on Jun 7, 2005 10:22:22 GMT -5
No, I Donny, I agree. I do think the head is a bit round (sorry to be criticising this pic so much Zhan - it's better what I can do but you did ask for critique).
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Post by Matsrik on Jun 7, 2005 15:59:06 GMT -5
I liked the hair the way it was..
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Post by Vert on Jun 8, 2005 4:19:32 GMT -5
Her nose is just a lump. (I don't like her nose *crys*) Her head is a basketball with a wig. She's kinda chubby. I can't see her boobs.
EDIT: Didn't see you changed the pic. The hair makes her look like blue's next girlfriend. It's a nice pic though.
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Post by Admin on Jun 8, 2005 4:25:03 GMT -5
Her nose is just a lump. (I don't like her nose *crys*) Her head is a basketball with a wig. She's kinda chubby. I can't see her boobs. EDIT: Didn't see you changed the pic. The hair makes her look like blue's next girlfriend. It's a nice pic though.See Sabator, now is the time I'd be getting disappointed.
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Post by Zhan D'vega on Jun 8, 2005 8:26:14 GMT -5
Oh yeah, Vert's opinion holds a whole lotta weight. VERT HOW COULD YOU, I drew it for you!!! :<<<<< Anywho, the third and (God willing) last take, not counting the painted version: Hopefully it's better:
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Post by Vert on Jun 8, 2005 8:32:22 GMT -5
Don't expect me to go light just because this ain't on DA. =P Thanks, it's a lovely gift. ¬_¬
Oh and that thing behind/beside her right arm, is that her arse or something?
EDIT: I like the hair now.
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Post by Merry Smindmas on Jun 8, 2005 10:01:21 GMT -5
Vert, that's her body - even I can tell that. It does look better Zhan, but I dunno she still seems kinda chubby to me. *shrugs*
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Post by midopa on Jun 8, 2005 12:41:42 GMT -5
That looks better! Can't wait to see it colored~
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Post by Artemus on Jun 8, 2005 19:41:48 GMT -5
Blaarhgarlnagharn hair.
...but, yeah, very nice. Kind of hard to get that sort of an angle with any sort of facial drawing, really.
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