World of Angst- yay I did something!

[Optimus Prime]

I just need to know if it sucks real bad or not =D. Angst is merely a cat to fit in with the Blinx universe temporarily and was appointed to make Blinx's abilities suck less. Maybe setting fire to his tail wasn't the best thing to do...

But yeah, super-rough version. This's more entertaining than the others.

[Oni Lukos]

Needs to be darker. I had to tilt my monitor A LOT to see it.

[Optimus Prime]

It's not anywhere near final, dude. I said that.

OPINIONS, or members start mysteriously disappearing one by one =D.

[Oni Lukos]

Yeah, but it takes about 2 seconds to darken it.
...anyway, I can barely read your handwriting, so I can't comment much on the humor.

[Merry Smindmas]

I actually can't read it to be fair, I'd suggest putting some typing over it just to make it easier for us kids. From what I could make out, seems good.

[Kulock]

Does need a clean-up, but some funny to be had. (Ty CAN swim, though.)

Can't read that last bit "I look like [] now"?

[Optimus Prime]

It's 'a manx' =D fire, yay!

All I'm concearned about is that it doesn't totally suck. And Ty can swim NOW, sure, but who held him under to make him learn originally, eh? EH?

Tails is just happy he's not being pushed into spikes for once =(.

So, semi-okay concept? Like I said, Angst is merely a cat to make things less bizarre at the moment. I wuv Blinx, and so does the court!

[Oni Lukos]

Hey, I can see it now, and read it.

Funny!

[Optimus Prime]

Anything that sucks entirely? You gotta let me know.

OR I WILL DEVOUR YOUR SOUL.

Would it be funny if Angst proper hits on Edgey =D? EDGEEEEY-BAH-BAY! And his disturbingly small nostrils. No peanuts could possibly fit in that nose.

And yes, Lyle's finger is still awesome.

[Oni Lukos]

Well, I can't tell if that thing at the bottom that they're in is a trashcan...or what.

[Optimus Prime]

*Snerk* it's just a piece of court furnature. It actually doesn't look like that in game my Maya figure confused me! DAMN HER!

Any other fatal flaws before I find my ruler? Seriously, it's liek, missing.

[Blues]

POOR PIKA

[Optimus Prime]

He has a beard. Ash will not have his face appear, as, uh, I don't like him.

Remember, comics do not reflect reality. A car battery would either roast a small rodent or at least make its hair fall out. Electrolosis, baby!

[Oni Lukos]

Car batteries are 12V DC, yes? 12V DC qualifies as ELV: extra low voltage. 12V is often enough to arc through skin (I've gotten about ~8V DC to arc through my skin before; it kinda stings a bit)--but not enough to fry a rodent, especially DC. It could possibly give a rodent a heart attack if the electricity flows through its heart. Quite probably, actually. However, if the electrodes don't pierce its skin, that's highly unlikely.

Granted, I don't know exactly what I'm talking about. However, I doubt that a car battery could a rodent unless it pierces the epidermis -- possibly if it gets down to the real skin. 12V really isn't that much.

Ogod don't kill me for overanalyzing *braces for impact*

Also, if the rodent were wet, it would great increase the conductivity of the skin making it much easier to kill it. So, if the rat's sweating...hah, double whammy. Water with dissolved electrolytes! Those electrolytes are really what makes water conduct electricity. Without it, water is an insulator! This is actually a common misconception. It takes more than 9V to arc through distilled water, and even some tap waters. With some salt disolved in the water, 9V is plenty. In fact, 9V is enough to power the electrolysis of copper. I've observed it. The copper wire submerged in the water disolved on one electrode (tinting the water blue) and oxidized the other electrode, turning it black (and, unfortunately, decreasing conductivity, which decreased the effectiveness of the cell, but...). It also caused some weird chemical reaction in the salt (it was some weird kind of salt that contained chemicals other than sodium chloride, including sodium iodide, potassium thiosulfate (I think) and some other chemicals) turning the water a pungent yellow (like from sulfurous chemicals) as if it were orange juice. The chemicals eventually settled at the bottom, leaving the utter bottom yellow, with copper hydroxides and sodium chloride crystals forming on top after the water evaporated. So, um, where was I?

[Optimus Prime]

... Good point. Well, his heart'd explode. Sweating + old = dead =D.

I have no idea how power an average car battery is. I DO know that even low wattage can cause heart issues provided direct with an internal conductor such as blood. We wuv yew, Darwin Awards.

[Optimus Prime]

Not finished, text blurred funny during resizing due to them not being rasterized, but you get the idea. Plus word bubbles are still needed.

I love screaming Lyle.

[A Notebook]

For a minute there I thought something was on fire on the second to last panel. That what makes said panel more amusing.

...yeah. ._.

[Optimus Prime]

... Setting Lyle on fire would improve the strip?

God, the poor squirrel. Even I'm not that heartless! He's in for a beating anyway and you want him ROASTED too?

[Kulock]

You're definitely improving, especially for the amount of work that goes into a full comic page. Quite nice lineart.

Oddly enough, the roughest bits are the panel boxes/circles, and Lyle either seems to spazz out too early, or needs different dialogue. (At least more panicked dialogue.)