Jamie Lee
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Dubbleyoo tee eff?
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Post by Jamie Lee on Dec 15, 2006 7:26:15 GMT -5
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Post by Admin on Dec 15, 2006 9:12:41 GMT -5
Whoo, nice read. It's funny how people take phrases like that for granted... It really got me thinking.
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Post by Robert on Dec 15, 2006 12:05:56 GMT -5
Very good. I've never doubted the power of speech myself, for all the reasons you list. Depending on someone's sensitivity, it might not even take a whole lot of words to completely derail them.
Only sentence that bothered me a bit was:
That comes out kind of awkward. I would've written it something like:
"And except possibly next to whatever deity you worship, if any, talk is the most powerful thing in existence."
That's a little more secular and also doesn't necessarily use "God" as THE religious article. After all, not everyone believes in "God"; either multiple gods or other structures.
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Jamie Lee
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Dubbleyoo tee eff?
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Post by Jamie Lee on Dec 15, 2006 14:27:54 GMT -5
Ahh, thanks. Yeah, I agree it was awkward o@ I just wasn't sure how else to word it.
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Matsrik
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Post by Matsrik on Dec 18, 2006 23:13:01 GMT -5
Even better, "The most powerful thing on our plane of existence"?
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